It was ok but I can say some disadvantages
You reviewed my animation and now it's my turn.
First- Well u know It's short and for that shortness it could be a lotmore detailed. Especially with the laziness of the photoshop grass brush. xD
And also its good anyway maybe. Seriously I can't belive its second animation but... I generally respect when a person i screative and will give u 4 because It's really short and not detailed compared to my Treton animation.
I know it's nothing good, and the details are lazy. There is no plot in this animation either and the music is getting cut of way to suddenly. Now, for defending myself, It took me 4 days to make, and that's with every hour I spend searching on google for what I needed to do and drawings. As I watched your animation again, I can see that what you mean by your's more detailed, but it's all the rubbis. It's just a mess of lines. insted of making 3-5 sirkles, why not think about how the light is hitting that area, and make it different. Perhaps this is just your style, but I it itsn't very often you see that many lines just going around and being a big mess on higher animations
A guy sleeping in the middle of a field... suddenly awakening to see flowers growing, It had nice animation and alright graphics,
The sound Quality was bad, I could hear thumps in the backgrounds.
Alright, average flash
Yeah, the music and sound effects were pretty bad, I wasn't paying much interest in them and only thaught about learning to animate. But thanks for the review! I will try and have better sound in the next one
i liked it
I isn't the best but for someone's 2nd animation i must say it is pretty impressive compared to the junk that manages to get posted on NG sometimes... Length would help also going deeper into plots maybe would be nice. Animation was surprisingly decent especially for a 2nd animation.
Yeah I also thought that a plot would be nice, but I just wanted to get more into the program and learn more. As I said, I'm not taking art classes and the school isn't offering any animation classes, so this was just done on my spare time. But I will try and ad a plot in the next animation. Thanks for the review!