mess

Subtitles goes very fast and it is impossible to read what its written. I dont have a time to pause because whole flash is pile of waste.

Lack of voices

Maybe if you put in voices it would have made it good, 7/10-2/10
due to the lack of Voice acting

really short really boring

i liked the concept but overall graphics, plus the lack of audio for the character's voices just made this really unappealing. You seem to have talent enough to get the graphics to be better than a lot of what floats in here... but still doesn't cut it for an interesting video to watch...