Ha ha ha.....sad..
i like the animation of the eyes
also i really like your drawing style and the idea
Since you worked so hard i'm giving you some points but you have to work harder. I don't like the introduction or the female snail, was a bad tween motion. I also noticed that you have problems with layers, put every symbol in a different one. That would help you a lot. I'm assuming you used that music for Gary the snail, not bad but not the best choise. Aside that i liked how a second story happened to the back but the sudden ending can be better realized, better graphics, better animation, betther idea. Keep working, was a nice try overall. Good work.
I really like the art style
The story was really cute, and the stuff going on in the background made me laugh, but the ending was really sad. :(