Shit
This was actualy absolute shit just wasted 3 minutes of my life, improve then post your vids mate
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******A LITTLE HEADS UP: This video, along with a few others on my account, don't really reflect my current abilities to animate and create movies now. The movies with this note in the description are all pieces of a larger puzzle that helped me grow my knowledge and skills when I was younger. I aspired to be a great animator, storyteller and moviemaker. I'm still on that journey today and I always will be on that journey until the day I die. I'm forever learning new things to improve myself. I could delete these pieces and forget about them, to make my channel look a little nicer and I guess make it "better quality" overall, but I think it's important to remember where you started, where you came from, and how far you've come.
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This was a school project based the the events of WW2 at Omaha Beach. I unfortunately didn't finish in time for the deadline but I was giving full marks for my effort anyway. (It was a music craft class, so the animation itself wasn't required, but it added to the marks.) The main project was so that the music fit the scene/ the "feel" of a movie that you were to create by any means, even just a PowerPoint film. I made this about 6 months ago and once the deadline passed, I kind of lost my inspiration to animate this, but hopefully I'll finish it off sometime in the near future. Right now I'll name it v0.50 as I did in the version control.
If possible, please take the time to review, constructively criticize, and/or share your views an thoughts on this animation and please if you can, tell me whether you think I met the projects criteria as said above. Thank you for your time, and for watching.
Peace.
-Maccamuffin
I feel bad for who ever teaches you.
If i was teaching your class I would have failed you for this. I know animation is difficult at best but this seemed lazy. Not like regular lazy, but the kind of lazy where you know you can get away with it because the teacher is a push-over. If you lost your inspiration why did you even submit the digital abortion to the portal? This is like the picture you draw for you mother in pre-school that is really bad but she puts it on the refrigerator anyway. I would not be proud of this, and if I where you I would not post this where anyone can see it. Its one thing to peer review, its another to put some of your worst work in a public venue for everyone to mock. If I had given this to a teacher when I was 14 I would have gotten laughed out of the school, or placed in a remedial class with the slow kids.
You have the right idea, but you need to place more effort into your work. Lots more. Good luck in the future. Maybe you should google flash animation tutorials.
Maccamuffin responds:
Although I don't completely agree with the review, I will respect your views and will take your words into account.
Just remember this was a submission for a MUSIC class, not an animation class. In fact, I don't even think the school HAS an animation subject. My animation is all self-taught and I will admit there is HEAVY tween abuse and that it was SEVERELY rushed.
Thanks for your time.
-Maccamuffin
Meh.
I immediately thought of conker's bad fur day.
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