really good continue like this :)
Author Comments
This is my first ever animation useing flash and yes its a dbz fight so if your not going to enjoy sonic fighting like a saiyan look away
thanks to:
mystical forest zone for the sprites and the backgrounds
music is Back to mad
if anyone could send a link to a tutorial on how to be better many thanks
PS: i wana put this on youtube as well could anyone tell me a good program so i can convert it and put it on youtube?
Not bad for a start.
It was a bit generic but surprisingly well thought out. It wasn't great, but everyone sucks a bit while they figure things out. Trust me, mine was terrible. Here's what I would improve.
1. Frame size. 400 by 550 is the standard, you should try to keep it there.
2. Backgrounds. You had some painful jumps, try to keep it looped in a way no one notices.
3. Teleporting. I have no idea why everyone thinks Sonic can teleport and fly. Or just ignore gravity, as the case may be. I mean, c'mon.
Still, it's a good start to your spriting career. Good luck, kid, you're gonna need it.
Really good!
Nice smooth sonic fight. Maybe in the future you can add a bit of a story. Also, why did you make the scene smaller? I await you future vids!
This has potential!
It's honestly hard for me to believe this is your first flash animation. It wasn't anything great, and I feel like it got the score it deserves, but it's definitely very impressive considering you're a beginner.
The animation was pretty smooth and fluid, with some exceptions. Put some more work and effort into your backgrounds next time. You seemed to have a decent understanding of backdrop animation, though. You did a good job of sprite animation; it's something you seem to know how to do pretty well.
This talent in animation could be used to it's full potential if you took the time to add some plot and character traits. Perhaps add some real lines and story. This could greatly improve your score.
I give this movie a vote of three, since it wasn't so bad, and I'd like to see more from you.
not bad
for a first animation that wasnt half bad nice action and fast paced,
by the way to get this into a video format you can simply do it using flash just go to export and choose a video format if you need more help just gimme a message and keep up the good work man ;)