this is my second flash movie and my second submission to newgrounds now its still stick people but im still play around with flash getting a feel for it as you might say
now tell my what you think and how i can improve my flash skill
sorry for the sound being all over the place
THX :)
also available on youtube
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=AJbDsHcMv3A
also what do u think of my voice acting??
Surprisingly alright.
The voice acting seemed a bit soft and mumbled in the beginning, but it got better toward the end. I'd like to see you put out more flashes! Just keep animating until you develop your own style, that's what helps to set your flashes apart.
not bad
for your second flash this is really not bad. at first i thought that this would have nothing new or spacial but after the scene with the window it ´s getting pretty good. i like your voice acting. you should make definitively more movie´s thats in my opinion the best way how you can improve you´re skills in animation and in voice acting. so keep up your good work^^
TheMadDogofDarkness
ps. sorry for my bad english
ok...
i've seen better, but i've also seen alot worse.
great for a 2nd animation though, i recomend making the heads as a seperate symbol, and looking on google for some particle effect tutorials. also, the walking needs improving, but on the whole, a solid effort
Urr Stickmen
I seen a dozen of these on Newground and this is ok but not that good if you want to improve try doing flashes with non stickman people
epic
I'm not gonna lie, that was pretty cool. the voice acting could have been better (although it was pretty amusing), but the fight itself was awesome.