i would say your a fan

i reseruved pokemon white but im going to get white after black p.s. u should add music

....Well.

The video makes you seem like a fanboy who would bash anyone who reserved white. Personally I'm going to buy pokemon white. But thats besides the point

The art is mediocre, The boxart is copypasted

I understand if you are a new artist and you want to show some stuff off, but try to make something people will actually care about.

small suggestion for improvement

make it a bit longer and add a bit of music. that would make this much better.
no hard feelings.