okay for a first... i personally dont like it...
I know i just gave you a crappy score, but i do have my reasons...
1. There is no voice over, you could literally put in any character.
2. Check the shoulder joints... they disconnect often.
3. It looks like an experiment with the program, my suggestion, start with stick figures and work your way up.
4. Make your own uniqe characters... theres no style stealing other peoples work.
Though flawed, this movie is not without its good aspects...
1. I know the program is difficult to use, i loved it, but my trial lisense expired. so, though a critic, youve got about 98% of the world population beat.
2. Neat concept... you dont see much animated orchistration on the web.
3. Killer tunes broham!!! even though i think youre a girl.
4. youve gotten the basic concept of movement down, now you just need to perfect smooth movement. try higher frame rates and more repetitive poses.
Overall, a bad flash, but a great stepping stone. dont get discouraged because im a jerk, hopefully i helped you in some way. keep up the... well... work, until it becomes a masterpiece. you have a unique view. Id like to see more from you.(: