Shows signs, needs vast improvement.
Okay animation, but you need a better microphone, or at least don't talk so closely or loudly into it. I couldn't understand a word of what anyone said.
Short, but that's not really a problem. And musick track is deafeningly loud compared to the almost mute dialogue. Better luck next time, but once you've had more practice you should be pretty good.
i couldnt understand anything and it was short and didnt make sence so 0/10 and 0/5
Is there any real reason to add 0/5? That doesn't give me any more of a detailed score.