Good Effort

I find your drawing style to be cute and professional (definitely better than anything I can come up with, that's for sure). But most users on this website prefer to enjoy animations that are... well... actual animations.

Not that I'm saying that this particular kind of animation is bad. I mean, I think I've seen one like this, and it was one of the best flashes I have seen (I can't remember the title, though). However, if you REALLY want to do better, you should probably add some sound effects (i.e. background music that is fitting, sound effects, voices, stuff like that). This is only a suggestion.

This isn't one of the BEST flashes I have seen on Newgrounds. But trust me, I've seen worse. ;)

Good effort, though.