At first, after "beating" pt.1, I thought it was horrible(no offence). But taking into consideration that this is one of your firsts (I think), and that your 13, it really isn't too bad. I probably couldn't even do this myself =D
the whole concept of avoiding bombs and playing as a pig have potential, but they need the talent and skills to back it up. With some more practice, this could become something great! Keep up the good work!