cant read what its saying

but its good idea, sort of comic book like. and nice drawing too
keep up the good work!

Hrm.

Ok, I kind of liked it but most of the people on NG can't understand anything that's written there. and besides that most people don't really like this kinda thing. it's not a game nor a movie. so yeah, it's a storyboard but that's probably something most people don't want to see. I do like the style in wich this was made though. so you get some credit for that, but please take these things by heart.