Nice concept, could use a bit of work
I like your concept. Point and clicks are always fun. Here's some advice on how to improve it:
- Better graphics. Graphics are hardly everything, but this has a bit of an MSPaint feel to it. Try getting them a bit more polished for the real thing.
- More interactivity. Simply clicking isn't quite enough. Try incorporating some elements that don't make it so possible to win by just randomly clicking around. (For example, the bit with the match, maybe you'd have to drag a match from somewhere else in the room across the match box, then take it to the candle to light it). Don't underestimate how much a simple detail like that can add.
- Some kind of story. You've clearly got a story in your head for what's going on here, so let's here it! No rambling prose, just a brief intro to what's happening from the POV of the helicopter pilot would be great.
- A bit more detail. I see what you were going for with the way it was done and all the silhouettes, but honestly, I couldn't always tell just what it was that I had clicked on.
You've got a good concept, and I wish you luck in the final product. The only further advice I can give you is to periodically take a step back and look at it as if you were someone else entirely. Remove all attachment from it and try to look at it as it truly is. Then it will be easier to identify where change needs to be made. I hope I helped!