Criticism*

I think this would be great if you actually made a full movie. Great artwort.
Nothing to really vote on though, lol.

Cool

He looks pretty cool! Can't wait until you use him!

Hm...

There's nothing wrong with your quality or style, but uploading fragments for criticism is simply a huge waste of time for everyone. There is no content to even criticize here. Try taking your character and putting him in a scene with some direction. I bet you could make a good cartoon, based on the art I saw in this three second animation.