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A small animation I made and put some music to it a decided to upload to here to see what you guys think, I know its nothing amazing but I'd like to see what you guys think, if you don't like it please tell me why

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Not bad

For what I'm assuming is first works, actually quite impressive. The animation is smooth, and the plot is simple enough to work. It's a bit blocky looking and the dialogue placement is messy, but other than that, pretty good.

flashallround responds:

thanks =)

Not bad at all

It's ok for first works. Keep on trying. Especially I love the music, like in movies in the beginning of XX century.

flashallround responds:

yer the style of music called ragtime by the way and thanks I'm making more =)
wasn't really first works but was made a long time ago

Actually quite nice. An adequate effort.

This is actually acceptable. You can certainly go over some other things such as animation in the blood and movement of the stick figures. But I can see you did try pretty well and it turned out good. Good work!

-Xmatross

flashallround responds:

thanks

ok i guess....

i didn't find it funnny but it wasn't terrible. i'll give you a 5

Needs work

This movie is in great need of revision. The graphics need to be smoother (Not blocky), the concept of the movie is moot (Next to no plot), and overall, I give you 3 stars for effort. Work on it a little more, and post it again! Lots of potential.

flashallround responds:

yer I'm working on other better stuff i made this last christmas 2009 so maybe if i find the time I'll sort it out

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3.06 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 6, 2011
5:31 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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