Funny,
Bannanna Dick, lol
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Steve who is lonely and depressed decides to go to a party. While there, he takes a hit off of a strange man's joint only to find that it was laced with PCP!!! He then transforms into Man-Fly! A superhero with a maggot ray-gun who can eat people's organs :)
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This is my first real flash animation so enjoy! It took about 2 and a half weeks to make but it took longer because I had to gather all my fellow CCA art students to record various voices. Thanks to everyone who participated. A special thanks to Alex Ghosn for the wonderful idea of showing Man-Fly's sensitive side lol
it was pretty good....
but i do have a few consrtuctive criticisms. first, id like to point out that the animation wasnt verry smooth, nor was the frame rate right. secondly, the voice acting needed to improve. the narrator didnt sound very entheused (probs spelled wrong). and lastly, the storyline wasnt very good. it was easy enough to follow, but just something about it made me uneasy.
other than that the movie was perfect, and seeing as i cant find any other submissions by you, i assume this is your first time. seeing this, im impressed. if not, then im still impressed, just slightly less than if it is your first submission. i feel like you have a great future in the portal here. keep it up and im sure you'll do fine :)
BananaDick66 responds:
Thanks a lot for the critique, this is indeed my first animation.. I decided to mess around with flash recently and I learned a lot from this one. Also, I didn't have a tablet to use so I drew everything out with my shitty laptop mouse :D for my next animations I will use a better frame rate and I think the storyline is supposed to be a little bit disturbing lol thanks again