Bannanna Dick, lol
it was pretty good....
but i do have a few consrtuctive criticisms. first, id like to point out that the animation wasnt verry smooth, nor was the frame rate right. secondly, the voice acting needed to improve. the narrator didnt sound very entheused (probs spelled wrong). and lastly, the storyline wasnt very good. it was easy enough to follow, but just something about it made me uneasy.
other than that the movie was perfect, and seeing as i cant find any other submissions by you, i assume this is your first time. seeing this, im impressed. if not, then im still impressed, just slightly less than if it is your first submission. i feel like you have a great future in the portal here. keep it up and im sure you'll do fine :)
Thanks a lot for the critique, this is indeed my first animation.. I decided to mess around with flash recently and I learned a lot from this one. Also, I didn't have a tablet to use so I drew everything out with my shitty laptop mouse :D for my next animations I will use a better frame rate and I think the storyline is supposed to be a little bit disturbing lol thanks again