Like you said "it's not the best flash ever" but i can see that you put a lot of effort in it. The intro, all the voice acting and synching it into the flash, etc.
The animation and char desing was pretty decent, and the plot is very creative too.
Only thing i would recomend you to really improve in further submisions is the sound quality, if you can spare some Mb, set it to normal or better. And for further voice acting it would be nice if you could give them a lil more "life" to it, it was a little monotone.
So bottom line, good job, try to keep improving, who knows maybe you'll get a daily feature someday. Good luck =).