Better than last

Definitely is better than your last one. Although I must say, the emphasis on the eye gouge was too little. Still better than what I can do though. Good job. (And this is your newgrounds account? Nice)

Not bad

I see this as something of an editing test. It shows a ridiculous amount of potential. I hope to see something form you again soon.

Alright

It was just okay for me. There was no story, the graphics were alright, and it ended too quickly. Try adding a story and making it longer. This will get it a higher score.