wow!
this is just...crap
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P.S. May be a bit loud. (also crappy)
My exams finished today. To commemorate this joyous occasion I give you this short cartoon. Yeah, sorry if it's too short, but if you leave a review and mention it, don't just only say "too short"! Give like, suggestions and crap.
BTW, he's sharpening his pencil
Yusuf responds:
thanks for all your contructive criticism and your in-depth review, not to mention a clear justification for giving such a low score
Well
I must say it was alittle too short but its good for an eleven year old and very funny aswell
Alright
I think maybe you should've tried switching up the animation a bit and make it more clear on whats going on.
Good work
funny but could use some work
It was very funny but I think it could use more animation.
lol holy shit funny
so true.you have to work more on your animation but your writing a creativity is awesome and high.so far you just need to improve on the way you try to so all your creative juices(animation form),so try different styles lalalal and draw all the time(from life that is).
Yusuf responds:
thanks.
