Animation fine, the rest.

Nothing wrong whit the animation, but to add sound and music does make so much differens! Maybe a bit more dramatic, which would have easily done with good sound effect/music and maybe faster/greater movement in some part. :)

Not Bad!

I really like your art style!
The message is great
this flash should have had some sounds.
nice work!

A cute flash

Short and to the point. I understand this was made for school, but some tips to improve it would be adding sound, and for newgrounds I suggest adding a preloader to it.