Good art and animation, it had its own charm to it. As others have said, sound could have made a big difference. Either music to go with the dialog, or perhaps voice acting. You can usually find free voice acting in the audio forum, and most of the voice actors don't care how small the project is, they're just glad to get something to do.
Keep it up though, I like this.
Not bad, for a first one
But sound would be really interesting. Even if it is only music, it would make it a lot less dull. :)
Ummmmmmm.......... NOICE PL0X !
Not worth watching without sound...
Animation = Solid
Pretty good for a first flash animation. The animation is smooth but theres no audio or background music and I don't really like how the whole animation just loops instead of giving you an option to replay.
Keep at it friend
not a lot happened but you have potential and its good for a first animation