is that explosive being a creeper
Is the sexiest animation ever.
Needs some more effort.
A cute little story, but with some major problems.
While the plot was mildly entertaining, the flash looks unfinished.
Things to improve on:
Color: It would look a lot better with some colors, even if they were simple.
Sound: Even a few sound effects could improve this flash.
Speed: The flash looped in just seconds, making it hard to read the text and understand the joke.
Overall, 1 out of 10. The joke was fine, but before you knew it, the punchline was here and then gone again. Slow it down, put some more work into it. Even minor changes could change this flash greatly.
WOW THIS ADVICE IS GROUNDBREAKING. AT LEAST THATS WHAT YOUR MOTHER SAID AFTER I DID HER IN THE BUTT WHILE YOUR FATHER WATCHED.
I gave the review a one because of how it looked and how fast it was...but after reading the Author Comments I understand it now and it's pretty good! Plus, for some reason, once I read Author comments THEN watch the movie it seems so much easier to watch. :)
Well I am glad you know the importance of Author Comments now. The movie is just random shit without them.
I'm not quite sure exactly what I saw just now.
A flash, you yiff.