is that explosive being a creeper
LOL
Author Comments
Where do lock babies come from? THEY COME FROM THE CAVE. Stone "Tom Green" Lock uncovers an ancient baby mine where babies seeped deep into the earth to later be uncovered by baby excavations. However, little does Stone "Tom Green" Lock know that the cave was actually an ancient trap set by Explosive Lock. Explosive Lock is upset Stone "Tom Green" Lock knocked off the Cutlass Classic insignia from his car, so he is going to eat Stone "Tom Green" Lock. However, Stone "Tom Green" Lock is made out of lots of minerals, and you can only eat so much minerals in one sitting. So Explosive Lock gets a tummy ache. I hope I didn't give away too much of the plot line. Regardless, the most important thing to know is LOCK BABIES COME FROM THE CAVE.
Enjoy the free save point.
JujubeLock responds:
yes
This
Is the sexiest animation ever.
JujubeLock responds:
GRENADE
Needs some more effort.
A cute little story, but with some major problems.
While the plot was mildly entertaining, the flash looks unfinished.
Things to improve on:
Color: It would look a lot better with some colors, even if they were simple.
Sound: Even a few sound effects could improve this flash.
Speed: The flash looped in just seconds, making it hard to read the text and understand the joke.
Overall, 1 out of 10. The joke was fine, but before you knew it, the punchline was here and then gone again. Slow it down, put some more work into it. Even minor changes could change this flash greatly.
Good luck!
JujubeLock responds:
WOW THIS ADVICE IS GROUNDBREAKING. AT LEAST THATS WHAT YOUR MOTHER SAID AFTER I DID HER IN THE BUTT WHILE YOUR FATHER WATCHED.
Whoops.
I gave the review a one because of how it looked and how fast it was...but after reading the Author Comments I understand it now and it's pretty good! Plus, for some reason, once I read Author comments THEN watch the movie it seems so much easier to watch. :)
JujubeLock responds:
Well I am glad you know the importance of Author Comments now. The movie is just random shit without them.
uuhhh....
I'm not quite sure exactly what I saw just now.
JujubeLock responds:
A flash, you yiff.