Love Hina wants it's pilot back.
Completely unoriginal. Also "bupsy" is a Goku rip-off.
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This is the first episode of a series I'm starting.
It's been 2 years since my first movie and I finally finished this one. Granted, of course, I was procrastinated. I will try to be less 'lazy' from now on.
So...so
Watched this in order to judge over the second part currently pending judgment.
Its..alright... relatively poor graphics, but a cohesive storyline.
That said, the storyline isnt too novel or entertaining.. but good enough to keep one watching. So.. pretty average, some originality and improved artwork could see this rise above the low end mediocreness I currently see it in.
hmm
this is like, love hina, except the characters arent girls, or draw very well.
Alimon-Genesis responds:
Actually, there were six girls in this episode.
As for the drawing, I know, I suck, not gonna do anything about
Good job!
Nice job with the first episode. As previous people have said the text is somewhat annoying but I like how its coded to work out. The pilot left a good impression on me and that's always a good thing.
Alimon-Genesis responds:
The music was a problem for me. But then I checked a Newghrounds Flash Tutorial and it really helped me alot.
LOL
this is like kirby combined with Love Hina the anime XD
Alimon-Genesis responds:
Love-Hina was something that popped in my head when I did this episode
Kirby is not yellow!
