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What I Think Of Bunchie.

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This is my 2nd actual flash, so some criticism would be nice! Thanks. There's something wrong with the API, i tried to get it to work but it just disappears after the 1st frame. If anyone knows any problems like this that can be fixed, please PM me.


this stinks

needs work


What The HELL its so GAy

This is crap

I understand it's your second animation, but throwing something together in "two days" is not going to help. . .anything. The music is annoying, the art is. . .=|

And just because someone gives you a zero, doesn't mean you have to get all bitchy and tell them to fuck off. We all know this is crap, and so do you. If you practice, maybe one day you will have a great flash that people will love.

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JaggedEdges responds:

Yeah. This is actually what i wanted people to post. Some helpful advice, not just 'SHITSHITSHIT' or something stupid. I do realise it is shit though. I'm working on something that's going to be a parody of 127 hours.

Why would you ever think of posting this?

If you were just experimenting with your second animation ever you should have kept it to yourself. Unless your work is actually good your first few movies and games should NOT be posted on Newgrounds, or, rather, should not even leave your documents to go anywhere. Please, keep your experiments out of Newgrounds >>.

By the way, I only gave a two because there's actually content in it.

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I'll ask for help and disregard everything posted!

This is bad, you should feel bad.

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JaggedEdges responds:

Yeah i do feel bad

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1.44 / 5.00

Jan 22, 2011
9:56 AM EST