... Interesting enough.

But the thing that really hooked me was every single track you used were my favorites, and decent remixes too, the story line was alright I suppose. Perhaps try animation to add with it. Like the background, so it doesn't look like shelves, that would make a bit more awesome. Take an area from a game and place it as a background. The music should stay, and the bubbles should have different surrounding borders based on which character is talking. That sums it up, still loved the music tracks and how they were on repeat xD.