needs work

needs a LOT of work. But... your first movie, my first movie wasnt all that great either.

Not that good.

O.K.... This is your first movie, but... it wasn't good. There's no sound and the graphic is bad anyway. The story is kinda bad... and boring. Because that's your first movie, I don't give you a 0.

Horrible

Wow.....I'm so sorry.....that REALLY sucked. Keep trying tho. You'll get it eventually.

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....LMFAO THAT WAS HILLARIOUS LMAO YOU PAWN ALL.... *cough* im giving u a high score cuz i feel sorry for you

Um...Ok?

That wasn't the greatest thing I've seen, not by a long shot, but keep trying, you can only get better.