Quite good.
I liked the orginaliy of the whole thing, the voice acting, the setting and the music. They were all good. Also the anamation, although of a low quality, was good enough too.
I think it would be better if the 'take of anamation' was slower, of course it can be whatever you want as its not real but i think it would make it look more realistic.
Secoundly you could make it better by proloning the whole thing it seemed too rush. It might be a little file clip from an accident or attack or something, but it should have some longer interval to make it seem once again more realistic.
I do look foward to more work from this though.