it ok

it ok at beast it need more stuff

Lot of room for improvement, yet funny :)

I believe that this series can be ultimately successful if you simply neaten things up, like the following:
Title screen: this is too pixelated, and needs to happen a little bit quicker.
The mouths: might wanna change them...
Grammar: I think you should go for the neat style, as I (And I'm sure many other people), like things that are proper, like WE instead of WII, and stuff like that.

Other than this, I think this can be successful, and my criticism is my personal belief, and you don't need to take it seriously :)
Nice pilot episode.

Maybe.... but not quite.

I like the idea, but the quality and length of the video is really low. As it is right now, it's not very entertaining. I'll pass it but it needs work.