AWESOME NEWGROUNDS INTRO!
How do you get that intro in your flash movie?
Author Comments
Hey, I made this in about 3-4 hours so enjoy. Please give me feedback on things to improve on in the animation.
The music is by Parry Gripp: http://www.parrygripp.com /
Better than I could do. Considering the song, you kind of dug your own hole,sunk your own ship, whatever. That's not what I care about. What I DO care about is how you managed to salvage it and not just use photocopies like a lazy dude. You varied the slides (to some degree). So, three stars. :)
Yusuf responds:
there's a way better version, just check my page
wow
you really let me down you have to color your animations well and you need to show more effective ways of showing us your story like when your character looks at the window to see the flat screen you could of shown the people inside.What im about you type right now is very important: instead of doing an animation that took you 3-4hours do a kick ass one that took you 3-4 days to make + you need to do the story bords for your animation(story bord:helps you to plan the scens of the animation).Oh try to do frame by frame animation hand drawn if possible and remember the 12 principles of animation there very very very important every good animation use them so learn the 12 principles of animation and dont forget them ok
Yusuf responds:
FUK U
could be better
Most of it's repetitive animation. Try to make more frame by frame and make it longer.
Yusuf responds:
even if it was better, you'd still give it the same criticism, so it's all the same to me.
2018 edit: the "repetitive animation" criticism was actually fairly valid. but I was a literal child, so my old response is not that surprising.
It is okay.
Mostly repeated animation, I would expect that from a frame-by-frame animations, but this is good for somebody of your caliber.
Yusuf responds:
thanks.
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