I would say that this was a good cartoon. I admit that it was a bit too short. Of course, you do say it was for a biweekly contest. The animation is actually quite good. I like how it is a pretty funny joke. I guess we know he's a good dad after all. The music's pretty good too.
I would like to see a pregnant lock. Of all the stuff you guys have worked on, I've never seen that. I don't know much about female locks in general. I guess the voices just all seem masculine.