I tried getting into this
I don't know how to rate this... but not good.
1 star- reason- you get the star because of the story- there was some spark of effort in a story revolving around this stick person- I see he was going places, but in the end stayed at the house, i am assuming his house he grew up in, meaning he wasn't going anywhere with his life in general. I dunno just my thought.
If there are so many people in your group... why not make something more worth while.