O_O
yo opino lo mismo que todos los demás, para ser el primero es bastante bueno, corto, pero bueno :D
talves a esto te podrías dedicar :D
Author Comments
Inglés/English.
This is my first animation, so this may not perfect. I do not know many flash codes, but to create some games. I have ventured to make an animation.
Hope you like it.
Español/Spanish:
Es mi primera animación, así que no puede que este perfecta. No me se muchos códigos de flash,pero se crear algunos juegos. Me he atrevido a hacer una animación.
Espero que os guste.
a good start.
Impressive first shot. I saw nothing really problematic. Simple, but effecrtive. Gota good sense of humor, but i would suggest dding a keyboard command as well, perhaps the spacebar sometime. I would imagine people with a laptop mousepad would have a bit of difficulty here.
Figure i would give a suggestion. Keep getting better my friend!
It was good
It was good but slightly short and keep aniamting
LoL
a bit too short, but its still epicnessness
Not a bad first
I like that you add both English and Spanish translations. It has it's funny moments too. Keep trying.
Pedrielmejor responds:
I have put translations that speak Spanish, not English.