damn good
this is an excellent first try. the only criticism i can give is to add an ending frame and end the loop. other than that it was funny and had good animation. good luck on future videos.
Author Comments
This is my first go at animating on a serious level. I would like for some feedback. I figured that New Years would be a great topic to do an animation on due to the fact that it is the new year. Everyone hates that guy that steals the girl you want so I thought I would play off of that with this animation.
Yeah dude
For your first real go, this is pretty darn good. I lol'd at the end. Keep working at it and you will be a champion in no time. Keep up the good work
latertaylor responds:
Thanks man. Already started on a new one. taking my time and seeing where it goes dude. :]
lol
nice man, reminds me of my old animations. you're starting in the right place. thumbs up ahhaa
Some
tight shit man <3
Its OK.
Nice try.
It loops which is bad, just put stop(); in the actions panel (F9) at the end with a END text.
very bad lipsyncing. Try to split the recordings up into a few different recordings and animate it to lip sync its easier.
The art of pretty scruffy, especially since theres not much art in it at al so next time try harder. I dont get why the friend walked out. Overall, much better than most crap, so 4/5 8/10.
latertaylor responds:
Thanks man. Yeah, I'm still figuring out all the commands and all in flash. The friend is the one getting the bj.