Good Animation
I did however expect more from it. But it's a pretty smooth animation for the most part. There should have probably been some action, and some music. Those things really would have helped. Looking forward to seeing more.
Author Comments
Well i got bored so i made it xD, experimented with V-cam and sound mixing on audacity n_n
squiral responds:
i understand, im planning, on making a movie with this character, and i did add music but flash did'nt like it :S, there is a version on youtube with music, if you want a link, also some othet stuff i have done ?
Slick
Really clean and fluid animation and the sound jumps right out, very clear. Good work!
squiral responds:
thanks, i have other work on youtube check out my channel "squiral247"
Nicely animated
A (IMO) very nicely animated stick figure animation, a bit short but oh well ^^. 6/10
Simple but not too bad
Its short, its a loop and it has little story, meaning or personality.
However, its quality is obvious from animation and art to the quality sounds. I would have given it 1/5 but for the quality sounds, especially the sliding sound, perfectly timed. Its actualy quite an absorbing little loop, and I kept studying it, looking at background, timing etc.
squiral responds:
great inquery, :), im planning on usung this character in a movie, and i wondered it he was worth keeping, any suggestions ?
Needs a story
Some things work as just animation experiments, but there wasn't much weight to this. A short scene about a guy running through this area so that he's "in" doesn't strike me as much. Also needs a play/replay button so that it is not just looping constantly.
But, animation wise it was pretty good. Not a huge stick fan though.
squiral responds:
ah you either like the sticks ot ya dont ;)