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This is my test of a stick-fight, for some reason I put aa TINY story in there. Yeah. There is NO AUDIO because it isn't a project, nor one in-the-works. Please review, that was the main reason I put this on here, so I could see where I can improve from the people's perspective.

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Honestly, this was a pretty good animation. Maybe considering putting sound into your videos would improve it, but I don't use sound myself in my videos, so no points lost for that. The graphics were great. obviously you put a lot of effort into them. The story didn't really make sense, but then again it was a short movie. Not bad!

Byronyello responds:

Thanks for the no points lost about the sound, and I've never really been good at animatiion, so I take that as a real ccompliment. LENGTH is what I need to focus on, and I'll add another animation onto my list of flash projectsssssssssssss, sorry about that, my neighbors are celebrating New Year's with their shitty music lol. Thanks for reviewing!

not bad, but not good

I can see you put your efforts into the animation parts very well. That I appreciate,
but here is where to improve.

Add sound effects
maybe if possible, add voice acting?
extend the movie length.

you did a fine job animating, but focus on these areas that need improvement.
I wish you luck on your future submissions.

Byronyello responds:

Thanks for that! (See above response)

It was ok

twas ok but unfinished, cant end there


Nice work, but there's not really any story or sound effects and it's short. I understand this is just a test, but please add some length, sounds and story, and this would be good. Nice work there, I want to see the full version if it comes out.

Byronyello responds:

Thanks for giving an actual response. Length, sounds and story, thanks for that! I'll focus on length!

Credits & Info

3.50 / 5.00

Dec 31, 2010
7:25 AM EST