A Concept That Borrows From Your Neighbor
After watching this flash from beginning to end it is easy to tell that you gained inspiration from Alvin-Earthworm's Super Mario Bros. Z series and/or another variant of similar to his creation. There is nothing wrong with inspiration, but this seems to a bit too similar. The story alone is an interesting concept though, but a bit too cliche even for the world of Mario, also there were some grammatical errors in your text boxes with "too" needing to be "two." The backgrounds and characters don't match up from time to time in other words the characters are bigger than the land they are on. The animation is good, each character moves well, but it is a bit sloppy here and there. The sound was great, but nothing too spectacular. The music choices were great however the music would cut off from time to time and that got a little annoying. Also the text boxes go by too fast, it would be easier if people could advance the story themselves, and the text in the text boxes was a bit difficult to read. Overall I'd say this is average to say the least, but these are just minor problems that can be easily adjusted and worked with so you're off to a good start.
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