Well...

^^Good Points^^
Safety Turkey, with real turkey-like sound effects! The sound of a turkey always makes me laugh, so this is quite funny, even though maybe the message wasn't really supposed to be. I liked how you used real life photos in with this as well as your own drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
...however, I don't really like your drawings. It's all done with the paintbrush tool it seems, which doesn't allow for really good drawing or a lot of detail.