Shorty!
Nice plot you've got in your hands!
Maybe a longer animation would do it.
And I wonder what happened to the guy before... I really wonder!
Author Comments
This was made for an assignment it is an interactive comic, the brief stated only two pages were allowed hence the length and cliffhanger.
I'm still uncertain if I should continue the series I'm a bit indifferent towards it hopefully yous get a kick out of it.
Too $hort
I know, it was an assignment, and it was supposed to be like this, BUT, I wish it was longer, that you'd put a little more into it before posting. That said, really promising storyline, lots of narrative possibilities, can't wait for next comic.
meh.
looks prety good, but still ...
it need some work on the graphics and i hope there will be a good plot
Ok i guess
Way too short for actually be immersed into it... In short, it's too short for me to tell if it would actually be interesting. I suppose its the best you can do limited within 2 pages, but I would prefer a longer one next time. Kudos
Fine.
Not bad at all. I think is a nice work.