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Made this for Graphics, and thought I'd slap a pre-loader on it and upload it here. It's not great, know, but I'd love to get some feedback for my coursework and figured this would definately be the best place to get it. Inspired by the Mr. Coo series and created with no planning on a "Stream Of Conciousness" idea.

1831 Frames
30 FPS



Really nice and glad to see.

Jay-Berry responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.

it's ok i guess

keep it up it's pretty good

Jay-Berry responds:

Thanks, if you gave it a 5 then that means that you enjoyed 50% of it, which isn't bad I suppose. :)

I like this kind of randomness

It make me wonder what will come next, and what the author thought about each part. Graphic was not too good, but still enjoyable. The only suggestion is, fix the replay. If I click the replay button, the main screen appears again.
Sorry if this is no help to you(and to others reading this), but this is just what I thought.

Jay-Berry responds:

Sorry about the replay problem, I'll get that fixed as soon as I can. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, though! The whole "Element of Surprise" thing was exactly what I was going for so i'm glad that you felt that i pulled it off.

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nice thing! add some kikasss audio!!

Jay-Berry responds:

I was going to but I couldn't think what kind of audio it needed, I might just get a song or a loop from the Audio Portal and put that over it, glad you liked it, though!


Not to shabby. Now make a flash movie, you seem to be talented enough. This should have at least had some sort of sound clip added to it, but in general, you look like you know what you're doing.

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Jay-Berry responds:

Haha, thanks.
I've been meaning to get on with a proper movie for a while but I've been pretty busy with college so I just haven't had the time. Hopefully I'll get round to it soon, though. It's really motivating to get comments like this, so thanks a lot!

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2.77 / 5.00

Dec 10, 2010
9:36 AM EST