I think this is what Hell is going to be like.
Once I fully surrendered to the insanity, it was actually quite pleasant. 10/10, 5/5
It was like a poor attempt at a really trippy movie. Too many things were giving it away that you were trying. The bugs out of the t-rex mouth was one. the part where he is flipping through the characters, spins them around, then the whole screen flips around, that was way too much of "Hey look, Im being trippy!" there were some parts that were ok. The part where he sniffs the ashes was gross and creepy, like you probably were shooting for. There could have been more with the ashes, that would have been cool. It just triggered some thoughts in my head. adding a star for that.
I think when you get more practice in animation it will be a lot better.
well, sorry I don't have any tips on improvement.
have a good day