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This is pretty much my first flash movie. Well, second made in a row, but first submitted. I made a little bouncing ball thing that explodes into a rabbit first... But I'll post that next. (I also made some other stuff, but its all just for fun.)

Plus, I have HUGE amounts of inspiration from Newgrounds; including one of my favorite cartoons to watch... Bitey of Brackenwood.

Thank you for watching and post if you like. I know it sucks but its a start.

Confusious say; journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.

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Needs work...

Yeah, I can tell you've definitely done too much DBZ drawings, and unless you can match the high-capacity fighting of DBZ, I suggest you dont try submitting a DBZ movie otherwise people will compare it to DBZ and you'll be seen as inferior to the original. Anyway, you definitely got the drawing skills. You know how to use them to draw, but not for animation. Your frame by frame needs work too, but you definitely need a background and some colour at least. Your worst mistake was submitting a movie before you were really ready. I scrapped my project 3 times and you should do some experimenting before you really go for that 4 score. Tell me when your next one comes.

MakoRuu responds:

My second flash movie is out, fully colored with sound. Lol - By the way, the copy of my flash program is NOT PIRATED - I asked my friend and he showed me his box copy. He made an iso copy on a CD for me. I don't know it that's illegal but I know for certain it's not pirated from the internet.

Nice idea, but the poor animation ruined it

The idea was great, but the lack of sound, colour and a good drawing style really braught it down for me. It's very good for a first animation, however, espicially with no tutorials read, so a 6 out of 10. =]

Not bad...

I can see you have potential... or rather, you had potential. Broadcasting the fact you're using a pirated version of flash will probably end your career pretty fast, so for your first and probably last submission this is alright. Some colour and sound would have been the next step, and some more "inbetween" frames.

Decent artwork shows promise, but overall crap

"I don't know if it was pirated, so don't hold me responsible"
What a stupid statement. I don't really give a crap about an amateur pirating Flash but your statement makes about as much sense as "I don't know if a migrant was killed to source the kidney I needed, so don't hold me responsible".

As to the movie... there is promise but you gotta put WAY more effort into it than that.

Just a tip

The drawings were good, though it could use some colour and sound.

Also, you may not want to advertise at the end of the video that you're using a pirated copy of Flash. I'm not sure that will go over well.

Credits & Info

3.86 / 5.00

Dec 7, 2010
11:57 AM EST