It made me laugh, I can see your a beginner so I'm not going to bash you n.n as TheDoctorMouse said, you do need to work on your audio, maybe edit it some, take out background noise, and dont speak so close to the mic
I did edit a little bit but I don't know how to remove the noises. And maybe I do speak too close to the mic. I try to make it better.
Edit: And I'm maybe a beginner. I am using that for a year now and now I started to make a testing cartoon animating.
The "Click the play button or die" Sound...
Please get a better mic or don't speak so close to it.
Well, before I changed my CPU, my mic seems okay. But after that, I hate that mic. >:( If you can't hear it clearly, sorry.