Good
It made me laugh, I can see your a beginner so I'm not going to bash you n.n as TheDoctorMouse said, you do need to work on your audio, maybe edit it some, take out background noise, and dont speak so close to the mic
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Thanks for watching my short clip. This is a stickman flash movie.
Edit: Yeah, my mic can't record it right. Sorry. I have to increase the volume of the sound and I didn't realize that the audio has noise.
KillProduction responds:
I did edit a little bit but I don't know how to remove the noises. And maybe I do speak too close to the mic. I try to make it better.
Edit: And I'm maybe a beginner. I am using that for a year now and now I started to make a testing cartoon animating.