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Sayuka and Karat

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This is my first animation. I made it for my animation class assignment. It was cool to see it come together. I hope you people enjoy it. I have been seeing people's animations on the site and I like a lot of them. It feels good to finally upload something to newgrounds.

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Some Issues

It was ok, but the story needs some work to actually make it something worth watching. The audio was also a problem, as the voices were muffled and hard to understand, the sound effects were too loud for the most part, and there was a sharp difference in the volume of different things. Finally, the animation itself could use some work to make it less choppy. On a whole though, it was pretty good for a first animation, and much, much better than most people's first flash post to NG.

richwindfencer responds:

Thank you for the honest review. I'm gonna do a lot better!!

Credits & Info

2.50 / 5.00

Dec 5, 2010
12:26 AM EST