Some Issues

It was ok, but the story needs some work to actually make it something worth watching. The audio was also a problem, as the voices were muffled and hard to understand, the sound effects were too loud for the most part, and there was a sharp difference in the volume of different things. Finally, the animation itself could use some work to make it less choppy. On a whole though, it was pretty good for a first animation, and much, much better than most people's first flash post to NG.