Uhh...
That needs a good bit of work. Some sound would be nice and the concept is pointless.
Author Comments
It was a short animation I did for art class in college. I had fun making it, so I thought I would submit it.
Needs a lot of work
-GRAPHICS: 1/10-
Drawings: 2/10
Animation: 1/10
-AUDIO: 0/10-
Voice Acting: -/10
FX: -/10
Music: -/10
Sync: -/10
-CONCEPT: 5/10-
Content: 6/10
Story: 6/10
Originality: 6/10
Execution: 1/10
-OVERALL: 3/10-
-COMMENT-
I hope you don't take this review as an offense :/. The reason for which i used the complete review form is to give you a quick look at what should be fixed (in my opinion of course).
Dude, there's a lot of work to do here. First of all, drawings were not very well done, got some random line thickness here and there, also you animated a static puppet ('xcept for the head). Giving the rabbit different poses would have made the animation more , hmmm, animated! Animation was waaaay too simple, also with very low fps rate. Not to mention the missing fx or music or anything else.
To make it very brief:
If you really want to make animations, practice practice practice!