Awesome!!!
Tradition flash cartoons
Author Comments
ADW is back with a brand new writer. After a very long absence, and realizing I can't write, Chris came along and joined the team. This episode will mark my second flash cartoon, and our first time teaming up together.
This is the first episode of what could be a long series, so make sure to check for new cartoons in the upcoming months. You can see Chris in action on his youtube page at: youtube.com/users/unfamou schris
Enjoy. Rate.
aDazeWork responds:
Thanks for the support.
nice
looks good, but i don't see much humor.
aDazeWork responds:
Thanks man..we'll work harder on the humor for ya.
cool :)
cool flash, just check the voice volume, it a bit soft.
aDazeWork responds:
Thanks, its a learning process for us!
Decent concept, execution needs improvement.
While this flash certainly has potential, it needs some technical improvements. I won't say you need to add color, but you do need to balance out the volume. The intro music, while not terrible, was terribly loud when compared with the voice-over. Also, the voice-over was so quiet I couldn't always make out what was being said.
Work on solid pronunciation of dialogue and audio balancing.
Conceptually, a decent piece.
5/10 to leave room for improvement. Keep it up.
aDazeWork responds:
Thanks Lunar.
Its our first episode and my second flash cartoon, so sky is the limit.
Thanks for your comment.