Keep on Going at it.
its not the worst thing i've ever seen just glitchy. try to fix those.
Author Comments
i made this a while ago and only thought to upload it now, its unfinished unfortunately due to problems with my old computer the flash file got deleted and only the Swf. remained so yes it cuts out and certain parts look glitchy and for that i apologise but nevertheless i hope you enjoy :P
THIS FLASH IS NEVER GOING TO BE FINISHED BUT TRUST ME I HAVE SOMETHING BETTER IN THE WORKS SO LOOK FORWARD TO THAT INSTEAD THIS WAS MAINLY MADE TO TEST OUT ANIMATING ACTION SEQUENCES SO SORRY FOR ANY DISSAPOINTMENT
Not to bad.
I gotta say it wasn't that bad, but where is the ending? That and the fact that music doesn't stop!
theGoronclub responds:
read the description
Very nice, I see another supermariobrothers Z!
Nice flash friend, and I have to completely agree with IRaPToRI.
I think.
I really think you should finish this flash, it's really good so far. The only peev I have with it is the wall that sonic crashes into in mario world seems a bit out of place looking, but I understand this is an unfinished piece of work. Hope to see the finished piece!
theGoronclub responds:
i wish i could finish it but i can't so unless i was to completely remake it it probably wont happen but you never know i might try it again someday and hopefully it will be better than the original both action and animation wise, thanks for the kind words man
Suspenseful ending
+ Good action, expression, and title-screen.
- A peeve I have is with originality. It reminds me of SuperMarioBrosZ, and that brings comparisons you probably will not want.
+ It feels nicely polished.
- (missed a spot)
A lot of the images are "jpegged". Using "lossless png/gif" when publishing the file should get rid of the "jpegginess" in your movies.
theGoronclub responds:
thanks for the criticism i'll assure you it wont go to waste :)