Improvement from the Last One, Technically

The animation is better from the last one. However, I liked the story from the first better. Still, very good.

This really made me laugh.

keep up the good work.

Hilarious!

I like it alot And its really funny! smugleafs humor kills me XD

Hahaha

This is actually pretty funny. I hope it gets front paged. It may not have the best animation, but it still has good audio and a funny story. Good Job!

Quite enjoyable.

Enthralling reading voice, amazing twist ending, hilarious art.

Kudos to you, sir. This is easily my favorite flash on this website.