Amazing!

For a first cartoon, this is great! A lot better than the other **** I've been seeing today, by far!

Very cute.

But generally, it is a bad idea to submit your very first Flash. This is way short, and there's really not much here. Keep practicing your art and your Flash skills, and come back when you're ready.

Okay then...

Was that meant to be funny? Or were you just bored out of your mind?

Survives the Lens of Time

You made it in 2001 huh? Funny thing is, 9 years later, it's still better than a lot of flash shorts that are made with better technology and a decades' worth of experience and technique. A pleasant little find in the attic if I do say so myself.