What?

This is one of the most awkward conversations ever. It sort of felt like I was watching a secret animated scene from The Room.

That was allright!

Prologue

This review is based on all the NG movies/games/imgs i've ever seen, so

don't be upset if I give you a low score after watching masterpieces

animations like HappyHarry's, Egoraptor's, "There she is!!", "Mastermind",

"Tar-boy", and many others.. Think of this as an constructive critic, not a

trolling spam.

Sound quality: 4/10 (Same voice for both chars and there was some loud noises.. erm)
Animation quality 5/10 (Not much movement although it was pretty nice)
Storyline quality: 5/10 (Nice one)
Effort: 8/10 (n/a)

Epilogue

Keep up, you're on the right way.

Decent

Hmm...well the drawings were really good, and the animation for the voicing and facial expressions was pretty much spot on. I mean, I wish this had some sort of a background drawn in other than just white nothingness, but whatever.

Are these characters supposed to be gay? I'm sorry...but they just really sound homosexual to me and I totally expected one of them to start fellating the other mid-conversation.

The voice acting was actually quite good. The pitch changes in your voice were interesting to listen to and not monotone and lame. Although the quality of the recording was pretty bad. I would highly suggest investing in a better microphone, recording program, or making a cover for yours to avoid picking up any breathing.

Overall not bad. Not much to it, but I guess you've shown with your first submission that you've got potential. Keep up the good work.

Nice Animation

A little clever twist at the end, but your art style is far greater than the story. I see some good collabs in your future.