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A video I made about a normal conversation between two mates. Enjoy?

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This is one of the most awkward conversations ever. It sort of felt like I was watching a secret animated scene from The Room.

That was allright!


This review is based on all the NG movies/games/imgs i've ever seen, so

don't be upset if I give you a low score after watching masterpieces

animations like HappyHarry's, Egoraptor's, "There she is!!", "Mastermind",

"Tar-boy", and many others.. Think of this as an constructive critic, not a

trolling spam.

Sound quality: 4/10 (Same voice for both chars and there was some loud noises.. erm)
Animation quality 5/10 (Not much movement although it was pretty nice)
Storyline quality: 5/10 (Nice one)
Effort: 8/10 (n/a)


Keep up, you're on the right way.

AmethystApple responds:

Thanks! :D


Hmm...well the drawings were really good, and the animation for the voicing and facial expressions was pretty much spot on. I mean, I wish this had some sort of a background drawn in other than just white nothingness, but whatever.

Are these characters supposed to be gay? I'm sorry...but they just really sound homosexual to me and I totally expected one of them to start fellating the other mid-conversation.

The voice acting was actually quite good. The pitch changes in your voice were interesting to listen to and not monotone and lame. Although the quality of the recording was pretty bad. I would highly suggest investing in a better microphone, recording program, or making a cover for yours to avoid picking up any breathing.

Overall not bad. Not much to it, but I guess you've shown with your first submission that you've got potential. Keep up the good work.

AmethystApple responds:

Thanks for the comment. They are not supposed to be gay.. lol.
My microphone is good, it has good potential. I am just messed up with the SWF and MOV settings.. X_X
If you know how to set it to a good quality... because with the flash file it didn't have these. I set it to the highest setting I could.. but it kept on doing these annoying static voices.
I really thank you for your feedback. I see this site is much more helpful than youtube, since in youtube no one ever comments on my vids, and I love to get feed backed, weather it's good or bad. (:

Nice Animation

A little clever twist at the end, but your art style is far greater than the story. I see some good collabs in your future.

Credits & Info

2.38 / 5.00

Nov 18, 2010
2:11 PM EST