GD JOB.
Wow, for such crappy music, you did a good job. Length though.
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[UPDATED] Fixed the weird noise & quality (file size is smaller now but quality is better)
The project was to make an animation with the exact music file they gave us, so i couldn't really change it into a better song since some of the animations (not obviously) is in the same beat as the music.
This is a short project me and my friend Arno (Jake) made for his school.
I'm the animator,artist and project leader of this animation, Jake helped with ideas and details.
The project was done long ago, but i decided to finish it up a bit and upload it on newgrounds for everyone to see.
It's my first animation and is very experimental and i tried different art styles in each scene (except the last scene which jake built and i added details on)
TheEiE responds:
Sadly, i couldn't change music or the length, but i'll work on other projects later which will hopefully be in a good length.
Very fluid.
I liked the animation! It was really good. I just wish it would have been longer.
I really liked the experimental touch
Too bad it was short. And I can understand if the last scene was done by your friend, but it felt pretty rough considering you had time to revamp the whole scene before submitting to newgrounds.
But I liked it. Good to see real art in flash for a change compared to most specific audience targetted styles that doesn't inspire.
TheEiE responds:
It was short, yes (School project were i couldn't have it longer than or less than 20 seconds)
I planned on redoing the last scene but i thought it would be nice having something done by a friend (since it was his school project, not mine)
Also thanks for the review.
Good start!
Well, good job, especially for a first animation!
I like the artwork you use, very stylish and original.
I would give you 10 stars, but it's a bit short, and the sound is a crappy from time to time (some noise-induced errors?), and furthermore sometimes the song simply stops (this may be intended, but why?).
Nonetheless, I like it. It's creative, therefore 4/5 vote, 8/10 stars!
TheEiE responds:
Finally fixed the audio quality and the song does sound bad but i couldn't change it nor could i change the audio file i had to build on (school project)
And thanks, i'll give you 4 moons and 8 planets in exchange for the 8 stars.